Finished ^-^.

[starscape]

I finished my fanfic, although my somewhat horrid grammar is being reviewed and hopefully fixed you can still understand the story.   I'll be writing a sequel, I'm not quite sure if I want to continue writing fan fiction after that though.  Simply because of my lack of reviews/critiques, and what is the point of writing something if others don't enjoy it?

Oh well, please read and critique thank you.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1186488

[Messiah]

Lyra, I'm the same way. If people don't take the time to read and enjoy my writings, I get discouraged and think about not writing anymore. Happens all the time. That's why I really haven't done much in a long time.

BTW: I think your fanfics are good. ^^

[starscape]

Arigato Sammi-chan

I started writing again because I got sick of the lack of Usagi/Mamoru fics.  I'm personally not a big fan of alternate realities ones because I don't overly see the point in it, not to mention is it that hard to have Usagi not save the day for once? I know she's the main character and all, but sheesh... I'm the freak who likes Usagi evil or at least remotely evil fics... just because it adds spice... but rarely does anyone of the supposedly "better" writers do so, so that leaves the ones who are still learning.

I love it when people give me critiques, I've been having people help me at moonromance, but one comment urked me.  They said because my chapters were short that people wouldn't read them.  Who on this planet said chapters have to be a frickin ten pages long to tell a story and still be good?  Grr..  oops I've been ranting..

[ShadowChaser]

oooh. i like the little poem you have. (only read the beginning) hmmm.... it looks good. i like how it's formatted like that. i don't know if you did it on purpose. but it's easier to read that way. i don't really like fanfics :\ i like originals better. but it seems good from what i've read/skimmed XD

and short chapters are fine. i think your chapters are a good length. sry if i'm not much help. if i read through it all i'll comment again.